Saturday, April 16, 2016

Skip the hard part, skip the hard part. Oh, hi, today I have no topics, and no idea how to get a topic that my mom will write. So instead, I'll write a story. I know, I haven't in a long, long time.  So I'll do the easy parts first, such as ... labeling this as a story, check! Wasting time, check! Getting side tracked,  check! Getting comfortable, check! Wasting more time, check! Okay, now I'm done with all that. I will write ... 9 cats,  the sequel.

So after all the cats were dead, the mice celebrated, no more cats to hammer their heads! So they explored the cat's house, and they found lots and lots of treasure. The explorers did not want to share. So they hid their findings. However, the news was eventually leaked out. Every mouse soon wanted some of it, and all the treasure got spent. Now, however, the mouse built a "huge city", complete with predatory defense. All cats stayed away, the ones who didn't didn't get closer than 3 cat lengths to the city. Then one day the birds arrived, and it turns out the mice weren't prepared, but they ran, gathered all the mice in the world and built a new city, with air defense. Then all the cats and birds came and charged, the cats were smashed by hammers, and the birds ran away. The mouses won again!

1 comment:

  1. getting there. better. but the first paragraph is a total waste. focus on the story and expand it, like describe the bat.--mom

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